jueves, 28 de octubre de 2010

My favourite day at weekend!

My favourite day at weekend is Saturday because I get up at one o'clock.I always lunch in a bar with my family to three o'clock.I'm going home.I chat with my friends to eight o'clock.After I'm going witch my friends at the park.I dinner in the telepizza to half past eleven and then I go home.I'm watching TV to one o'clock and finally go to bed.

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  1. ... in a bar with my family to (AT)three o'clock.(THEN) I'm going (I GO) home.I chat with my friends to (UNTIL) eight o'clock.After I'm going witch (I GO OUT WITH) my friends at (TO) the park.I (HAVE) dinner in the telepizza to (UNTIL) half past eleven and then I go home.I'm watching TV (I WATCH TV)to (UNTIL) one o'clock and finally (I) go to bed.

    Too many mistakes!! :(

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